Film production mark

The mark you recieved at moderation for your production is 32/60. Targets for improvement are: work on your titles - you need names of actors and actresses and your titles need to fit the conventions of your genre. You also need to work on your sound - fade cars, record dialogue over the top (Mr Thornton said he spoke to you about this), continue music from opening titles in background - it stops too suddenly and is actually a great choice for setting the mood, so continue with it in the background. If you do this, your mark could improve significantly.