Script

Joe: Oi, hurry up. Where have you been?

Billy: I had to persuade Liam, he didn’t want to come.

Elliot: why not?

Liam: because I don’t know where we are going.

Joe: I told Billy where we are going

Liam: He hasn’t told me anything

Joe: ok well we are…

Billy: shhh, don’t tell him

Joe: come here, I’ll tell you

Billy: No don’t, leave it as a surprise

Joe: Billy, come here

Joe: There was a girl named Hannah who was walking back from a party, people have said             she was with someone, they think it was a guy. Well she was walking back, all alone, her         friends left her before she came into the woods and no one has seen her since…Although         rumour has it, he lives around here

Billy: So we better be careful then eh boys

Joe: still coming?

Liam: hmmm, I’ve got a bad feeling

Elliot: oh come on

Liam: fine, lets go

Elliot: its getting dark guys, we better pick up the pace

Billy: does anyone have a torch?

Elliot: yeah

Billy: get it out then so we can see where we are going

Liam: (pointing to pit) Whats that?

Joe: Did you not hear? Its where he puts your body

Liam: Who’s he?

Joe: what? You don’t know who HE is?

Elliot: Well if the stories are true, you’ll soon find out.

Liam: Joe, stop scaring me man

Billy: He’s getting scared already haha

Joe: Elliot, help me out of here, its freaking me out.

Elliot: sure, give me your hand

The Thirst

Shot list

Shot #1. Long shot of all characters.

Shot #2. High angle/medium shot of all characters walking through woods

Shot #3. Medium shot of characters talking

Shot #4. Low angle shot/ tracking of one character

Shot #5. Medium shot /tracking of two characters

Shot #6. Long shot to close up of all characters.

Shot #7. Low angle of multiple characters

Shot #8. Match on action of character being helped out of ditch.

Film production mark

The mark you recieved at moderation for your production is 32/60. Targets for improvement are: work on your titles - you need names of actors and actresses and your titles need to fit the conventions of your genre. You also need to work on your sound - fade cars, record dialogue over the top (Mr Thornton said he spoke to you about this), continue music from opening titles in background - it stops too suddenly and is actually a great choice for setting the mood, so continue with it in the background. If you do this, your mark could improve significantly.